查看完整版本: 【岁末征文活动】【无厘头之淫荡校园】

评分：8.5
理由：
很有趣，犹如搞笑的情色小品，令人捧腹啊！作者写作别有蹊径，富于创新，善于联想，喜爱拆解谐音，擅长改编诗作，尤以“只因兽奸月下行，颜惨无饶觅淑阴。乳烂心湿虽风趣，猛挥百战无处寻”最为经典了！当然，全篇所涉及的学校体制、社会氛围、教学环境以及师生关系，无以不深深打上性爱淫乱的烙印，难怪，此校学生不以性淫乱、性贿赂为耻啊！看看看着，觉得这种故事就像是我们周边的那个倭国了呢！
作者叙述也很流畅，语法正确，生动诙谐，情节有趣，不失为一篇奇文妙论啊！

捉捉虫子：
张文丽被她缠的（得）没法子，只得推诿答应下来。“……不过，现在你要好好听
课！”
“米（美）国发动的……伊拉克战争，其目的，是什么？”
被这么一说，朱老师反到（倒）是哑口无言了
“算了……小依你给我做（作）、做（作）首诗来，算作你这学期的语文考试成绩！”

靠，太有意思了，学校在哪？我要报名！！！！！！！！！！！

楼主描写得好细腻啊
情节也为到位
有身临其境的感觉

这篇文章实在雷人，我都快肚子笑痛了，关于女人身上到底几个洞洞的研究实在出乎意料，还能把眼保健操改编了，忒强悍了。这些段子充分体现了楼主的思维实在天马行空

实在很佩服作者的文学功底，能够想到那么多诗词并毫不犹豫地“淫化”，关键是能够做到贴切顺畅，实在不易。
美中不足的是，作者过分强调了中学部，没有能够涉及大学，让人觉得有些虎头蛇尾，如果能够添加这些部分，那就可以将无厘头贯彻始终，却又入情入理了。

这学校也真是淫荡！呵呵！我什么时候也能上这种学校呀？

This writer has really put all sorts of sex fantacy, imaginations and illusions to the extremely extent. Never before have I read such a story that has so violently distorted the real meaning of sex making, nor have I come accross such increditable explicit descriptions of the sex acts in every sort of manner what the writer can imagine.

Though the setting of this story is a school, no where can we see any atmosphere of a school life. To be frank, this is a zoo full of wild animals carrying out whatever sex activities the writer can imagine.

We can never talk about the plot, structure, characterizatin and theme of such type of story. I think even the writer does not aim to write such high level of literary story. He mainly intends, I think, to express his inward own way of sex imagination. He starts flying madly and crazily like an aeroplane which has lost its control. His thinkings are choppy and disconnected. His presentation of the story is absolutely nothing to do with the school either. In his story, every human being is a sex animal, ready to love or to be loved, rape or to be rape or to exercise what ever sex acts the writer can imagine.

We cannot call this story as a story. We have better say that it is only a sex dream created by the writer himself. Yes we do have a school as the setting, but starting from the Principal, the male and female teachers down to the students, girls and boys, carry out sex activities no matter it is in the Principal's room, the classroom and any part of the school. The girls can mastubate publicly in the classroom during the lesson. They can give sex services to their male teacher at any time and anywhere  and in any form - without shame or dinity all. They can be proud to have incest and adultries with their fathers or have abnormal sex tortures of inserting their anus.

But as this is a very extraordinary sex dream of lots of abusing the normal sex behaviour, the extremely strange and abnormal contents have arrested the attentions of some readers who are used to read adult stories with human like presentations.

Whether you like this type of writing or not, it has at least given the readers a new face of writing - there are lots of off track the moral standard of sex relationships, a mixture of mised animal like Principal, teachers and students. Some readers may find the writing extrordinarily exciting because the development of the fantacy is so unexpected and funny.

They may perhaps find some sort of brutal and roaring sex satisfaction in reading such a writing.

The especially strange mind of this writer is absolutely out of our understandings.

看来无名人士不能评分，不过我想打个7.0分
作者的想象力和几首淫诗确实为本作增色不少，但是我认为作者并没有什么创作正统小说的经验，情节安排和噱头控制如同看笑话书一般突兀，没有浑然一体的协调感。当然作为校园小说，作者走如此粗俗的路线也实在有南辕北辙之嫌，更何况粗俗的文字会使得读者对于黄色情节的刺激敏感下降，从而减少了肉欲的满足度。

楼主，你太有才了！
除了这句，我无语了~

潜水许久，见楼主这样的大作真是不得不冒头出来大叫一声有才啊！
另外，你那篇大武林我也拜读了，绝了。

真精彩的文章，我就喜欢这种类型的，希望楼主能多创作一些这种类型的

哈啊

啊，这文章想象力很丰富，我佩服啊，可能是第二个卫斯理

:excellence 你很强悍
这个话题都给你想到
而且跟真的都差不多
很无厘头

楼主太有才了，
这样的文章构思都能想出来啊
真是太佩服啦

无厘头+淫荡校园=搞笑,很好的想法,支持多发此类文章

写得不错,非常搞笑,让我印象比较深的是在语文课上那段,很搞笑.

呵这真是太乱来咯`不过写的很好呢``由其是小依这个名字让人`乱想``

文章不错，只是短了一些，看的不过瘾，楼主抓紧再出下一篇

那首诗写得太精彩了，佩服了，传道授业解惑写得也好，赞一下。

淫民教师阿，很高尚的职业哦！全身心的服务！:sleep